Please Use Titles Instead Of Headlines For The Articles On Your Website
Headlines have horrible grammar and try to be cutesy instead of informative. I understand the origins; but, for articles published on the Internet, the reasons are less valid.
You have much less control over how much space headlines take up. Most of the websites that I regularly visit have many headlines that—in my browser—flow onto a second line but don't use more than half of it. Use that space to fix the grammar, to make the subject clearer. Use "and" (or even "&") instead of those damn commas which make it harder for me to figure out if the subject is 2 related things or if there are 2 possibly unrelated subjects.
You already have my attention. I'm visiting your website, aren't I? What's with the wording of your headlines? Are you trying to confuse me? "Hey, a microprocessor news article! Nope, it is about a console game." OK, most of your headlines don't mislead me that much, but many are the equivalent of a subject without a verb. I want to know more about the article—and you could have done that—but you decided that cutesy and confusing will appeal to me more than intelligent and informative. Don't you know your audience?
While we're talking about articles published on the Internet instead of in print media, I would also like to ask you to stop trying to fit everything into paragraphs. You don't have that space limitation anymore. Some things are so much easier to understand when they are conveyed via a list. Remember that you already understand the information that you are trying to pass on and I am trying to understand what you wrote without having to read it too many times.
Thank you for taking the time to read my rant.
